Saturday, January 02, 2010

Issa writes:

露ちるや若竹お子のぞくぞくと
tsuyu chiru ya waka takenoko no zoku-zoku to

a dewdrop spills--
the bamboo shoot
shivers



unskilled Taigu answers:

a leaf trembles
and the dewdrop-moon
shivers too

or

a leaf trembles
from dewdrop to moon
shivers

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